I really liked this story. It seemed almost autobiographical and that made it seem more real. I would love to meet Robin in a bar!
Nookiehunter
by
Anonymous05/23/07
i understand
excellent well written, plausible story. i can understnd how a woman is hestant reentering the game, and it is a game unless you consider sex a holy thing, or, as i and most men do, just too damn much fun to be used only for procreation. i didnt fool around during my marriage, the divorce resulted from many other problems. however within an hour after leaving the courtroom i was on the phone working down the lisy of women whjo had let me know they wantyed to play. the third call clicked. we had dinner at 8, and were back in my new apartment by ten. we both knew we were scratching itches and i was honest with all the many, and i mean very many the women i had sex with over the next fuve years before i remarried a woman who shared my feelings and we have had8 years of a semi open, but always sharing relatioship that is solid. so, unless he hAS NO SOCIAL SKILLS, ITS RIGHT THERE FOR THE AVERAGE MAN, BUT, BECAUSE OF SOCIETYS STUPIDITY, ITS NOT HST EASSY FOR WOMEN,
Sexy and smooth recitation of a woman's re-entry into the single life. Hot love scenes and good character deliniation. I look forward to more stories from you. Kudos!
Having never done clubs, I am not sure of the scene, but thought your story very nicely done! I enjoyed it, and liked the direct language that went with a direct story: it all fit very well! egg ;)
I love this story. Very hot and erotic and also sweet. It leaves you feeling all warm and fuzzy and hard (or is it wet?). I hope to read more by this author.
If this is truly a first effort, than I want to read more as you improve those writing skills. The flow of the story was as natural as water cascading over a waterfall. Let me amend that fist sentence. I want to read all your work regardless of when you first wrote anything. Your characters, while not fully developed, and how could they be in a short tale like this, sparkled with incisive thought and verbal sparing. I throughly enjoyed the comment on the back being covered with hickies, as it evoked a distant experience of my own, and for that I thank you. LOL
You are a very talented writer. Please continue and I promise to read everything you send out.
As a writer of erotica for over ten years now, I can truly say that I wish I had written this. Thank you, and keep up the very good work.
English
Congratulations!
Congratulations on having your first story approved. I think for a first time writer your story was well written, and extremely hot.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Welcome to the world of a writer!
Nice
A very hot and erotic piece of work. Well written and nicely detailed.
The author did a good job with the narrator's emotions, describing her fear, uncertainty, lust and joy with a sure hand.
Well done.
Very Sexy!
I really liked this story. It seemed almost autobiographical and that made it seem more real. I would love to meet Robin in a bar!
Nookiehunter
i understand
excellent well written, plausible story. i can understnd how a woman is hestant reentering the game, and it is a game unless you consider sex a holy thing, or, as i and most men do, just too damn much fun to be used only for procreation. i didnt fool around during my marriage, the divorce resulted from many other problems. however within an hour after leaving the courtroom i was on the phone working down the lisy of women whjo had let me know they wantyed to play. the third call clicked. we had dinner at 8, and were back in my new apartment by ten. we both knew we were scratching itches and i was honest with all the many, and i mean very many the women i had sex with over the next fuve years before i remarried a woman who shared my feelings and we have had8 years of a semi open, but always sharing relatioship that is solid. so, unless he hAS NO SOCIAL SKILLS, ITS RIGHT THERE FOR THE AVERAGE MAN, BUT, BECAUSE OF SOCIETYS STUPIDITY, ITS NOT HST EASSY FOR WOMEN,
Excellent story, TK
Sexy and smooth recitation of a woman's re-entry into the single life. Hot love scenes and good character deliniation. I look forward to more stories from you. Kudos!
I should take more nights out...
Having never done clubs, I am not sure of the scene, but thought your story very nicely done! I enjoyed it, and liked the direct language that went with a direct story: it all fit very well! egg ;)
You did great
especially for your first submission! Well Done. And HOT.
Hot and sexy
I love this story. Very hot and erotic and also sweet. It leaves you feeling all warm and fuzzy and hard (or is it wet?). I hope to read more by this author.
Very good!
TK you are pretty good at this writing thing. I like this on a lot! Plenty of heat with good characters. Well Done!
mmm
i wish i were a hot bachelorette!
On being a batchelorette
If this is truly a first effort, than I want to read more as you improve those writing skills. The flow of the story was as natural as water cascading over a waterfall. Let me amend that fist sentence. I want to read all your work regardless of when you first wrote anything. Your characters, while not fully developed, and how could they be in a short tale like this, sparkled with incisive thought and verbal sparing. I throughly enjoyed the comment on the back being covered with hickies, as it evoked a distant experience of my own, and for that I thank you. LOL
You are a very talented writer. Please continue and I promise to read everything you send out.
As a writer of erotica for over ten years now, I can truly say that I wish I had written this. Thank you, and keep up the very good work.
Paris Waterman.
the_panda@hotmail.com
Wonderful
A great story. I loved it. It was well written and had the right amount of story and sex.
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