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Anonymousover 11 years agoPretty good :D
You could imagine the first person as being either a girl or a guy and that was pretty nice. But you could have used more synonyms. You said "gasp" a bit too much and also "astonishment" twice at the same action :/ But overall I really liked it :)
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