All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 01'

Please keep the whole story the beginning, then it will never end. It is very well set up with many open ends to grow upon. I do so hope this is one very long chain story.

I can't wait to see where this leads, Red. I know we'll all have our own ideas, our own characters, and there really is no telling where this tale will go. But I can't wait to find out ;)

Obviously, the King was terribly remiss in not having her educated.. She could run into some embarrassing situations with visiting royalty who are definitely educated.. I mean, he should have given her SOMETHING.. Well, she should be a benevolent Queen having been brought up in near poverty.. She should be able to do something to help all the folks in her village, especially her close friends?? This, too, could be an interesting tale!! Looking forward to the next chapter.

It seems that this story is off to a thrilling start! Good job, Red!

Another powerful opener to another hit chain in the making! I'm so glad I can be a part of this one as well!

You did a great job as always, I'm looking forward to being a part of this chain.

As you well know, I enjoy all of your stories and you are off to a great start with this one. John

I'm already very fond of Evie's fire. One advantage of starting late, I get to read the next in the chain immediately! *laugh* Excellent work, Red. A wonderful beginning to another epic.

Beautiful!

I have a special fondness for stories of strong young girls who assert themselves as I'm a strong feminist. Any male who isn't is by my definition an unethical person and a shithead. Being a feminist simply means being fair. That's all. I'm a Guy.

I really like the plot line so far and the characters.

Thanks for a Great start on this Tale

Of a Tale I am sure I will enjoy since you, "RedHairedandFriendly", are involved in it. I look forward to reading this Tale.

Mahalo, Red.