All Comments on 'Up Against the Wall'

ALL OF IT -- Then use his service gun to shoot off his pecker

good story. And to Don-Donna2..A story about a couple role playing and his dick needs to be shot off? Jeez, no overreaction there.

Thanks for the defense anon, and for recognizing the story for what it is ... two people PLAYING!

don-donna are notorious assholes who haunt this site with their myopic view of how sex stories should be written. They or he has managed to write one (1) story in the last three years, and it was a vacuous few paragraphs of dribble. They, or more likely, he is a worthless vessel of excrement. Unable to create anything of his own, he defaces other people's efforts. If you get any positive feedback from them, you know you've written a banal piece of tripe.

Not because of the story but the way you wrote it. The first few paragraph was written in third person and then towards the end you changed to first person. Confusing.

I enjoyed the story very much. I'm not sure if the excitable first commentor read the whole story or not, as it's obvious that what is happening between the two was consentual when you get to the end. Otherwise, it would have been a cruel story. Then again, the story is in the reluctance/non-consent section, so who expects a romance?

I thought that changing the perspective from one of an observer to one of the participants at the end was interesting. The separation of the two sections was clearly marked. It wasn't Henry Miller or the Marquis DeSade, but I enjoyed the story very much.

my penis is forever gonna remain flacid.not a bad story,but hairy women?

It was a good story overall. Yes there is but one minor "but", hairy women? Maybe it is just me and that in the States hairy women are a rarity. No judgements here; to each their own furryfan;)Look forward to more.

It kept me enthralled from the very beginning right to the end. I've read it umpteen times and have had some very, very enjoyable orgasms from the story.

FurryFan is a great writer and I, for one, look forward to more of his/her submissions.

The woman in the story sounds very sexy in her own way

I am a furry fan too and all that hair was just too erotic.