All Comments on 'Going home'

...I loved this poem. It's SO English. My senses were all satisfied. I did find the rhythm a bit rocky in places but - over all - I find it delightful.

Welcome to Lit UYS, I will be looking for more of your poetry. You made me homesick for a place no longer there.

Tess

and so down to earth. (pun not intended)I did visit Great Yarmouth once, but it was just a fleeting visit. Nicely done anyway.

This reminded me a lot of John Masefield.It appealed to me as an Ex pat Englishman though your with first line I thought you were in Wales.

Sorry, but I'm a stickler on this:

"it's" is a contraction for it is, while

"its" is a possessive pronoun.

I'm sure you meant the latter but used the former.