Voyeur

No need to wait for "wood"...

Beautiful, evocative use of description - I felt like I was there (also watching secretly). More please!

very much to the point ...

... throws you into the act of watching, but leaving a lot of room to fantasize ...

Just a peek!

A great scene! But only one scene.... I would be interested to see more of your writing. 'Voyeur' gives us some idea of the narrator's character, though not a lot; I'd like to know how you develop other characters. And 'Voyeur' has a very interesting situation, but not a plot, since the situation doesn't develop any. I'd love to know more about how you think and whether you're really as good at putting your thoughts into words as this example suggests.

A vignette

A vignette, that's what a tale like this used to be called,
a short single scene, some might want longer but if this is what the author wanted to produce then she has done just that.

Captures the moment

So evocative of the mingled pleasures of masturbation, seeing and being seen.

short but sexy!

I read your post in the forum and came over to see what you had written. I enjoyed it, even though it was over so quickly. Where have I heard that before! You conveyed the excitement of secret watching well. Do write some more.

Wow!

I thought this was soooo good!!

I am trying to figure out

why this story had to end so abruptly.

hot!

I love reading this sort of thing from a female perspective

Watching you!

Would have been so hot to watch you pleasure yourself as well!!

Was that me?

That is so close to an actual session I had on my own in the bush one time. Now I am wondering I if did have a spy?

Kiwi

Voyeuristic Treat!

I thoughrally enjoyed your story Morri.
Being somewhat of a voyeur myself this struck a chord deep within. I wonder if he knew he had an admirer following him into the woods?

Such a gloriously naughty short story. Love it!

erotic

thank you for the story, like It a lot

Excellent

Very hot, loved it, would love you to catch me wanking! :-)