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champagne1982champagne1982almost 17 years ago
Quick read

a catchy rhythm tangled with a universal idea.

I really hope you tackle a few more sophisticated forms in the future. Try to stop relying heavily on cliched ideas to develop your themes, though. Doing so turns your talent into white bread, middle America boredom and you have too much to waste in that direction.

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
AWESOME!!!

I loooove it!!!! i can't think of a better way to say it. beautiful. soooo putting this one on my favs!!! --SQ

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