All Comments on 'A Big One!'

this is a wicked look at something many of us profess to want but don't know what to do with once it's in our lap ;). Thanks for sharing! This poem will be mentioned in the New Poems review thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum on the Bulletin Boards.

...and funny but take a look at the 14th line "now it's become come small" Something's wrong here and it's nothing to do with size, :-)

Tess

Just come across this witty ditty. Brilliant. So few words but they devastatingly reveal a huge problem.

Cutesy in a tongue-in-cheek way (or something else entirely), but not erotic. Nor that literary or even literate. It does rhyme, though... The line "To late I saw my mistake here" should be "Too late..."

And I have spent too much time with it. AMT

Nice short tale. A big one is always fun. Cheers, I'm Karissa.