All Comments on 'Upon the Midnight Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Loved it!

I was caught up in the idea of other survivors on his island and was surprised to find he was making love to a mermaid! Well written story.

Kowboy61Kowboy61almost 17 years ago
This piece draws the reader ...

... into the tale and does not release its grip on the reader until the final word. Well done and quite enticing. I look forward to other tales that the author submits that deal with life on the island.

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