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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust05/27/07

Good stuff

good stuff, Curt

mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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by twelveoone05/27/07

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write my name
in rust colored
bodymade paint
across your
insensativities

Try this: take out "bodymade", paint on line by itself, so it can be read as "paint across your..." etc. Just a thought. I like the quirky rhyme buried in this.

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by Bill Dada05/28/07

^

I agree with 1201, but either way (bodypaint or not) I like.

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