by Bewitched69
I love to write lesbian but I'm not ver good at it.
It was a very believable story and very hot also, and the story could be continued. Very good
Thanks for a story which was far more then wam-bam-thank you mam.
You use some desriptive concepts I haven't read from other authors.
Good job.
"...going back to their respectful bedrooms" -- come on! Too many typos and poor choices of words really marred this story.
I'm sitting here with pre-cum dripping from my hard cock. Oh - how wonderful it would be to have a threesome with those two hotties. You had me from the first paragraph. These two women have entered into my fantasy and I can't let them stay there by themselves. Please excuse me while I take care of this throbbing, burning, itching desire to satisfy them. Here I go!
It seems like women write the best lesbian erotica. I have to wonder why. I guess the reason is self evident. Don't stop writing this quality work.