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by Valkyrie2006

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champagne1982champagne1982almost 17 years ago
Nice

You've got a very smooth and soothing mood in this poem, almost as if you're going to break free but are being coaxed to stay. Then you say that final: "again". It would be just as good, possibly better, if you dropped it.

Thanks for sharing.

Carrie

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
TO SLEEP AGAIN

and capture your soul, TK U MLJ LV NV

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