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Found Poem #6

byBill Dada©
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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve05/30/07

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Wow. When God sends a message, he really sends a message. Clever poem.

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by bluerains06/04/07

I would rather think

that its a message from the moon
saying
leave your today with me
or it will stay in you tomorrow...
but, yours has a more punishing impact....blue

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by annaswirls06/07/07

ah ha

enjoyed this, thanks for putting the link in your sig :)

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by KOLKORE03/28/08

More like a pounding poem...

that is in the way it hits you. I am quite sure that Hallmark et all. would rather not have this one among their 'Get Well' collection, not at all...

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