All Comments on 'Body of Art'

You start with a short sentence. And then another. Like when they meet. And talk like. They're reading. Cue cards. And then they have sex. Sorry, but this reads like every second sentence is missing.

good idea like that she wasnt the perfect woamn and someone found her attractive ... not well written and ended a little quickly.

but i also have theory that any story that involves artists, drawings or taking pictures needs to include them. I really like illustrated stories.