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by normal jean06/01/07

tears

of joy at this beautiful thing. You two have wings, ever so gently, what a beautuful way to say, I love you.

lovely lovely work, ee

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by champagne198206/01/07

ever so lovely

This is almost like a modern ghazal, the refrain picked up in the latter half of the poem, reminding us that sometimes all love needs is an ever so gently placed reminder. Lovely sentiment and wonderful rhythm. Thanks for this ee. This poem mentioned in the New Poems Review Thread on the PF&D forum.
--Carrie

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