A beautiful and realistic story of true love that shatters the secrecy and mystery of a life long infatuation. Priceless… scandalous… awe inspiring…
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Anonymous06/09/07
OK, but was lacking something
This story has been done before. "The Perfect Couple" by Ms Jessica Trollop (on another site) is eerily similar, "A Tale of Forbidden Love" by mejau71 is similar and extremely well written. Rgjohn has a similar story where the mother and son are captive by another.
I was trying to find a new and interesting plotline. This story covered old ground without being very creative.
Very original, erotic with a feel good happily ever after outcome. You're a terrific writer with great creativity. Loved it!
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Anonymous06/19/07
Not so rare
This is an exellent story ,incest between mother and son can be the ultimate love.The act itself or the thought of commiting it is not so rare as we are led to believe.I am not talking about child abuse,but an act of love between two consenting adults,often initiated by the mother.I consider this submission not such a fantasy,lets have a sequel
The story may have covered old ground, but I enjoyed the approach. I thought your descriptions were very good, and the sexual tension you created was almost palpable. Over all, I have to give you a very well done.
Absolutely incredible!
I can't thank you enough for this awesome tale!
I love the experiment angle! Even if the players were pre-inclined to incest, have you ever thought to play it clean? As in there were never having felt the pull? But as a reader I just have to thank you for such great stories and I hope to read more very soon!
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Anonymous03/24/09
Damn Good!!!!!!!!
Good story, but I would have f--k you up. 500,000 would have been spent tracking you ass down(smile) You know you write some of the best stories on this site.
by
Anonymous05/09/09
Son and Mom discover their basic urges
This is a fine story, no wonder, it's from the master. Mother and son are confined in a situation where they can't help showing and viewing what the other has between the legs. Danny, as a teenage boy, is constantly hard as he sees his mother's tits, ass, and above all, her glorious twat, which like every other son he's thought and dreamt about for years. Poor Dan is embarrassed that his big dick is always stiff in front of his mother, but Mom soothes him, telling her boy that it's perfectly natural for him to sport a hard on. It is, just as natural as his mother's growing fascination--and leaking cunt--with Danny's big prick and his potent balls. When Dan whacks off his Mom says, as her cunt spasms, I never knew a man could shoot so much sperm! His mother is as eager as her son is not to have him waste all that beautiful cum, but instead to shoot it up where it belongs--his mother's needy twat. Danny, now in control, tears up his Mom's cunt and finally creams his own birth canal! When "The (benevolent) Creep" frees them, it turns out that Danny-boy has fucked a baby up his mother's twat, and they'll be a proud and happy motherfucking family from now on!
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Anonymous06/13/09
part 4
this is the great great story of mom son incest. this is like the movie SAW. the idea is one of the great in this
story but i-room part 2 and 3 is not good because
dad/daughter or other character is not attractive like mom son. mom son incest is the best attractive in incest world so allways be in mom son subject.please come back soon with part 4, where mysterious jigsaw kidnapped mother & son
and told them if mother get pregnant by the son than they will be released.
I really enjoyed reading this. I hope you continue with the mother-son thing. If you enjoy foot fetish as well, check out my stories. Mom's Sexy Feet and More...
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Anonymous10/13/11
a great story
wonderfully crafted story that i was happy to stumble onto.
Great story. Was glad you painted the father as a total dick. That way the dissolution of the family was a good thing. And he was an idiot for ignoring a wife like that!
Contine with the series thinking about grandmother-grandson relationships or two mothers and two sons in the I-room together or mother, daughter and son in the I room together.
Keep writing, as your touch on touchy subjects. But all deal with lust and wanting what you do not dare to have. My personal favorite is fucking wives of men who freely give them to me. To fuck you my long thick meat and breed them. Some of the husbands are bi as myself and they suck and swallow loads. Some even have me fuck their pussy and stretch and breed it as I do their wives. Everyone getting what they need.
I agree that this story covers old ground. But, is that a bad thing? There is nothing new in this world, most especially having to do with the heart. Beautiful, but would be frightening. Here is another request, one window on real life. A beautiful maiden Aunt. A little on the zaftig side with flaming red hair, creamy white skin, and B cup breasts awakens in bed with her nephew (also a virgin). In the fullness of time, in the I room, she takes his virginity - as he pierces her Maidenhead. The story details are, of course, yours to create. Besides, the end result was(is)love.
Have enjoyed this several times, now. I think, really, it might take a little longer for this to happen in reality if it ever does. The Son would always give in, the Mother a maybe. If she is in a happy and satisfying relationship it would probably not. I think all sons love their mothers. Indeed they dream at some point of taking the father's place. They may not ever be able to admit this, even to themselves, but they do. And for good or bad, the boy's female intimates are forever measured against the standard set by the influence of the mother. Whether the effect is positive or negative. He might look to find a girl just like the one dear ole' dad married, or from guilt feelings or other reasons, might just go for the polar opposite. Whatever happens, I think that mothers and fathers totally ignore the influence they weild in their children's sexual lives. Most times, I have learned in my work, the offspring has a good or bad sex life for the rest of their lives almost certainly due to the sexual influence of the parents. Not what they teach - but what they do or do not. The Mother here is written to give her son a totally positive outlook on love, sex, marriage, parenthood, and committment. Kudos.
English
Unique
That was certainly different and unique. I look forward to more of this series.
The I room
pure fantasy,but very good,this author could write some really erotic incest stories
nice
story worth reading
original idea
thank u..
unique
I like the stories craftsmanship. please continue.
loved it
It has a SAW like element to it. But erotic instead of horror. Nice idea. Look forward to future adventures.
Remarkable
A beautiful and realistic story of true love that shatters the secrecy and mystery of a life long infatuation. Priceless… scandalous… awe inspiring…
OK, but was lacking something
This story has been done before. "The Perfect Couple" by Ms Jessica Trollop (on another site) is eerily similar, "A Tale of Forbidden Love" by mejau71 is similar and extremely well written. Rgjohn has a similar story where the mother and son are captive by another.
I was trying to find a new and interesting plotline. This story covered old ground without being very creative.
Wonderful Imagination
Thank you for that imaginative story.Illustrations would have made it, incredible.
Magnificent Story
Very original, erotic with a feel good happily ever after outcome. You're a terrific writer with great creativity. Loved it!
Not so rare
This is an exellent story ,incest between mother and son can be the ultimate love.The act itself or the thought of commiting it is not so rare as we are led to believe.I am not talking about child abuse,but an act of love between two consenting adults,often initiated by the mother.I consider this submission not such a fantasy,lets have a sequel
Well done
The story may have covered old ground, but I enjoyed the approach. I thought your descriptions were very good, and the sexual tension you created was almost palpable. Over all, I have to give you a very well done.
Awesome!!
Amazing story! Truly Captivating:) Keep writing.
Heartfelt thank you!
Absolutely incredible!
I can't thank you enough for this awesome tale!
I love the experiment angle! Even if the players were pre-inclined to incest, have you ever thought to play it clean? As in there were never having felt the pull? But as a reader I just have to thank you for such great stories and I hope to read more very soon!
Damn Good!!!!!!!!
Good story, but I would have f--k you up. 500,000 would have been spent tracking you ass down(smile) You know you write some of the best stories on this site.
Son and Mom discover their basic urges
This is a fine story, no wonder, it's from the master. Mother and son are confined in a situation where they can't help showing and viewing what the other has between the legs. Danny, as a teenage boy, is constantly hard as he sees his mother's tits, ass, and above all, her glorious twat, which like every other son he's thought and dreamt about for years. Poor Dan is embarrassed that his big dick is always stiff in front of his mother, but Mom soothes him, telling her boy that it's perfectly natural for him to sport a hard on. It is, just as natural as his mother's growing fascination--and leaking cunt--with Danny's big prick and his potent balls. When Dan whacks off his Mom says, as her cunt spasms, I never knew a man could shoot so much sperm! His mother is as eager as her son is not to have him waste all that beautiful cum, but instead to shoot it up where it belongs--his mother's needy twat. Danny, now in control, tears up his Mom's cunt and finally creams his own birth canal! When "The (benevolent) Creep" frees them, it turns out that Danny-boy has fucked a baby up his mother's twat, and they'll be a proud and happy motherfucking family from now on!
part 4
this is the great great story of mom son incest. this is like the movie SAW. the idea is one of the great in this
story but i-room part 2 and 3 is not good because
dad/daughter or other character is not attractive like mom son. mom son incest is the best attractive in incest world so allways be in mom son subject.please come back soon with part 4, where mysterious jigsaw kidnapped mother & son
and told them if mother get pregnant by the son than they will be released.
"Feeling HOT HOT HOT! Yes sir"!
Great build up and a heartwarming ending. Well done!
Quite good although I'm not a fan of bringing children into it
Awesome read!
I really enjoyed reading this. I hope you continue with the mother-son thing. If you enjoy foot fetish as well, check out my stories. Mom's Sexy Feet and More...
a great story
wonderfully crafted story that i was happy to stumble onto.
So crazy and HOT !
What a situation to be in!!
Amazing story & a breath-taking read.
Keep it up. I love you.
Excellent
Great story. Was glad you painted the father as a total dick. That way the dissolution of the family was a good thing. And he was an idiot for ignoring a wife like that!
Much better than that whore wife trash. Thanks!
HOT HOT HOT
So unbelievably hot, my friend. I could sense the love between those two tangibly and fully, and I loved the sex scenes. Very arousing. :)
just love it..
keep the gud work...and keep posting such masterpieces...
Contine with the series thinking about grandmother-grandson relationships or two mothers and two sons in the I-room together or mother, daughter and son in the I room together.
Still.......
waiting on chapter 5!!! Read this chapter five or six times now, and it truely is a timeless classic!!!!!
great series!!
loved all parts in the series.. I came so many times while reading those..
Fuck!
I fucking love this fucking hot fuck story.
Better grammar, Please?
Good story teller, needs to improve language skills as some goofs are distracting from an excellent read.
Hot story
Keep writing, as your touch on touchy subjects. But all deal with lust and wanting what you do not dare to have. My personal favorite is fucking wives of men who freely give them to me. To fuck you my long thick meat and breed them. Some of the husbands are bi as myself and they suck and swallow loads. Some even have me fuck their pussy and stretch and breed it as I do their wives. Everyone getting what they need.
Could you write an I-Room story about a brother and his younger sister who hate each other from childhood?
Great story
Love it....will be reading them all!!!
old?
I agree that this story covers old ground. But, is that a bad thing? There is nothing new in this world, most especially having to do with the heart. Beautiful, but would be frightening. Here is another request, one window on real life. A beautiful maiden Aunt. A little on the zaftig side with flaming red hair, creamy white skin, and B cup breasts awakens in bed with her nephew (also a virgin). In the fullness of time, in the I room, she takes his virginity - as he pierces her Maidenhead. The story details are, of course, yours to create. Besides, the end result was(is)love.
Sweet.
Still a great read.
We miss you Ahabscribe, wherever you may be.
Wish you were here
Have enjoyed this several times, now. I think, really, it might take a little longer for this to happen in reality if it ever does. The Son would always give in, the Mother a maybe. If she is in a happy and satisfying relationship it would probably not. I think all sons love their mothers. Indeed they dream at some point of taking the father's place. They may not ever be able to admit this, even to themselves, but they do. And for good or bad, the boy's female intimates are forever measured against the standard set by the influence of the mother. Whether the effect is positive or negative. He might look to find a girl just like the one dear ole' dad married, or from guilt feelings or other reasons, might just go for the polar opposite. Whatever happens, I think that mothers and fathers totally ignore the influence they weild in their children's sexual lives. Most times, I have learned in my work, the offspring has a good or bad sex life for the rest of their lives almost certainly due to the sexual influence of the parents. Not what they teach - but what they do or do not. The Mother here is written to give her son a totally positive outlook on love, sex, marriage, parenthood, and committment. Kudos.
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