All Comments on 'The Moebius Strip Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Creative

Very nice and very creative. Perhaps a bit more detail and duration would be nice for some of the sex scenes, but you write well.

Keep up the good work.

MichaelphyteMichaelphytealmost 16 years ago
WOW !

I love your short stories; techies will rule! Great concept, fun, and sexy !

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