Women think all men think with their small head. This story proves women aren't all the little angels they claim to be. Sue and any woman like her are dumb bitches!
I found this story very clever and amusing!
Great job! 5 stats from me!
In my opinion this is my favorite "Loving Wives" story that I have read yet. The reason is simple, it is realistic but has a happy ending. "Familiarity breeds contempt" is an unfortunate part of human nature. This condition is of course true of most marriages. We all need to be grateful for what we have especially when that is a spouse that is "doing their job". I have found that I have a strange urge to read these "Loving Wives" stories. I am most interested in the nonsexual aspects of the relationships. I have found out how important loyalty is to me and how abhorrent betrayal is to me.
Thought I was going to hate it for the first couple of paragraphs - should have known better!
Neat, well-written story with a lot of good humour and high quality dialogue.
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Anonymous09/14/12
that is what brothers are for
brothers, they are pain when they are little, but they are sure great when they become men. The kind of men that make great dads and wonderful husbands!!!
The flurry of comments got me to re-read this on my break....
great story, of course. A little cartoonish, but I think that was the idea. Cute, funny, and the point was made.
QUOTE:
"That really isn't any of your fucking business!" yelled Sue. "You can bet your ass that you won't be the man I choose, so just butt out!"
Considering he is her brother, I should hope to hell not!
I had a total wtf moment there at the end. After i recovered I spent the mex five min trying to stop laughing. Wonderful story!
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Anonymous12/26/12
That was an amazing story ! ! !
bill
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Anonymous01/08/13
Good Work
I have to say I have enjoyed most, if not all of your stories here. I particularly like this one, as your ability to inject humor into tragedy is a skill, fully on display here. I like that you leave the reader with something to think about. Personally, I read some of these "cuckholding" genre stories out of morbid curiosity. I feel it is the same thing as slowing down on the interstate to stare at an accident, curious to see if there was a traffic fatality or not. This particular story is so refreshing compared to many of the soap opera dramas so rampantly contained here in the "loving wives" category. Additionally, I love your use of Beatles references throughout your titles. This note is to say I enjoyed this, and you as a contributor to this site. Well Done!
I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Every wife should have a brother like Bill. I don't suppose you have Karen's phone number do you?:)
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Anonymous08/18/13
"Threatening to cheat is the same as doing it"
Summarizes the low level of intellect these closet cucks are living with, thank god for mental institutions and outreach programs so cansellyou, betrayed, and the rest of the cuck brigade don't hurt themselves.
I loved it when Mary and Karen poured gasoline on the silly bitch wife. Either Jerry should be getting a lot more sex from his wife or he should be flirting with Karen. I especially liked the twist at the end, when it turned out that big brother was lecturing his little sister and setting her right. Great story!
Wow!! Like dynamite or C4 small, short and powerful.
This was a direct hit to the heart of the situation. When you play outside your relationship/marriage for the first time there are many variables as this story outlines just a few. Some people can easily deal with it but most can't/won't. I guess the moral of the story is think before you leap. Nicely written!
Professor S. I. Hayakawa must be rotating in his grave like a water turbine at the ignorance of people who say things such as: "Threatening to cheat is the same as doing it" as they lack the capacity, heck, the competency for semantic definition.
So that map I drew on a napkin, with a crayon, is the same thing as the actual property it roughly describes?
If i write a fairy tale does that make me a fairy?
If I write a story about a ferryboat does that make me a ferryboat?
if I write a story about Republicans, does that make me a Republican?
if i write a story about honest and competent Republicans would that make me a satirist or a fabulist?
Come to think of it, that would qualify as a fairy tale!
How did FinalStand put it “Standing in a Church does not make you a Good Christian, anymore than standing in a garage makes you an automobile.”
I'm going to fuck someone else, you can like it or get out..... why in stories like this or any story or hell even real life, why isn't throwing the bitch through a window three stories off the ground an acceptable response? I'd say its perfectly justified.
There are some actions you can commit against your partner that are unforgivable...this is an example of one of them. I'm sorry...I would never have forgiven it. It's pretty obvious that she didn't love her husband to begin with. When you love someone, the very thought of hurting them causes you pain. No wife could do this to to their husband and honestly feel any love for someone other than themselves, much less their husband. Hope he would divorce her slutty ass and marry Karen.
Wifey could have become a cheating skank. However the threat of her husband enjoying some strange brought back her sanity. It's a shame no one ever talked to me. Oh well.
While the story is entertaining, I have serious doubts about these "friends". If i were Jerry, I would be looking for a new wife and a new set of friends. When a friend is going through a crisis, abandoning him to teach him a lesson is not the way to help. Neither is saying that the moment your "friend" makes a mistake in her marriage that you are chomping at the bit to seduce her husband. In real life, people commit suicide during situations like this. Then what would these "friends" think about their help? I would have to find another way to open my friends eyes than belittling him and abandoning him if he were making a wrong decision. Self-righteous people are a personal irritant to me. That is probably why I had trouble fully enjoying this story. I gave it a three for the good writing though.
Once she says that she is going to cheat and take a lover and he has to accept it or get out, the marriage is over. What kind of love can that woman have for her husband to say something like that? Where is the respect and loyalty? Even when she changed her mind it would be too late to save this sorry excuse for a marriage. You can't have a marriage when only one person wants to be faithful. And chances are real good that she will cheat in the future only she won't tell anybody.
His friends actually did him a huge favor by not accepting this behavior of him becoming a cuckold. I try to be as accepting of others as possible but I would not want a willing cuckold as a friend.
Am I being closed-minded? Maybe, but it is how I feel and believe-it is my opinion.
Thank You for a real thought-provoking story.
After reading some of the comments here I have a question.
Okay, show of hands. How many commenters have English as their primary language? Okay, how many can read English?
The story was totally tongue in cheek. I think she ruined the marriage with just the ultimatum, but the way her brother handled the situation was priceless. He knew his sister enough to know that just trying to talk to her would be met with the arrogance and shitty attitude that he did get. So go in from the side door, back off the frontal assault.
So many "Loving Wives" who think somehow that they should be able to get some strange don't stop to think how they would react if their husbands demanded the same privilege.
and should suffer the consequences. She only dropped her self-centered scheme out of fear losing something herself. She doesn't give a shit about Jerry and never has as far as I can tell.
Jerry needs to show her the door, yesterday and let her earn a living giving BJ's at the bus terminal. If he does, Jerry will not have lost anything and Sue will have made the career move that she so deserves.
I don't like any of the characters including Bill and Mary. But the writing is pretty good. The dialogue is interesting and moves the story along and real people could say the words.
So 1* for the characters and for Sue (who would also benefit from a good case of the clap) and 3* more because it is a well written tale.
There aren't many stories I read more than once on this site, but...
I think I must have read this one 4 or 5 times and I enjoy it every time. HDK has put so much of a troubled marriage in one page. He said it all with one simple phone call. Brilliantly done.
I know I've read it before because I again zeroed in on the first phone conversation when Sue told her BROTHER he wouldn't be the lover who would get strange from her. Now, that was strange. But, as a college acquaintance once told me, incest is better than no cest at all.
English
great!
Women think all men think with their small head. This story proves women aren't all the little angels they claim to be. Sue and any woman like her are dumb bitches!
I found this story very clever and amusing!
Great job! 5 stats from me!
Just what does this story prove?
A brother will always look after a sister or sisters
So far, this is the best!
In my opinion this is my favorite "Loving Wives" story that I have read yet. The reason is simple, it is realistic but has a happy ending. "Familiarity breeds contempt" is an unfortunate part of human nature. This condition is of course true of most marriages. We all need to be grateful for what we have especially when that is a spouse that is "doing their job". I have found that I have a strange urge to read these "Loving Wives" stories. I am most interested in the nonsexual aspects of the relationships. I have found out how important loyalty is to me and how abhorrent betrayal is to me.
Found this after a comment.
Thought I was going to hate it for the first couple of paragraphs - should have known better!
Neat, well-written story with a lot of good humour and high quality dialogue.
that is what brothers are for
brothers, they are pain when they are little, but they are sure great when they become men. The kind of men that make great dads and wonderful husbands!!!
The flurry of comments got me to re-read this on my break....
great story, of course. A little cartoonish, but I think that was the idea. Cute, funny, and the point was made.
QUOTE:
"That really isn't any of your fucking business!" yelled Sue. "You can bet your ass that you won't be the man I choose, so just butt out!"
Considering he is her brother, I should hope to hell not!
So much in so few words
I loved this story!
Laughed my tail off... LOVED that surprise ending!!
Bill is not only a good brother, he is a GREAT friend. Thanks for fun read.
Just found this Gem.
Great Story. Thank You.
Funny
Great read. Thank you.
A Hilarious Rant-alizing' Tator Tot of a HarddaysknightTale
Because you can't stop at just one.
hope the husband doesnt find out
seriously if i found out my wife went that far and had to be coerced into changing her mind i would still divorce her.
Once they have taken that first step and went about finding a way to do it the respect and love is lost.
Wtf great story
I had a total wtf moment there at the end. After i recovered I spent the mex five min trying to stop laughing. Wonderful story!
That was an amazing story ! ! !
bill
Good Work
I have to say I have enjoyed most, if not all of your stories here. I particularly like this one, as your ability to inject humor into tragedy is a skill, fully on display here. I like that you leave the reader with something to think about. Personally, I read some of these "cuckholding" genre stories out of morbid curiosity. I feel it is the same thing as slowing down on the interstate to stare at an accident, curious to see if there was a traffic fatality or not. This particular story is so refreshing compared to many of the soap opera dramas so rampantly contained here in the "loving wives" category. Additionally, I love your use of Beatles references throughout your titles. This note is to say I enjoyed this, and you as a contributor to this site. Well Done!
Happy happy happy
But, lets here more about that lonely widow ???
Nice
Cute, nice, with a little twist at the end. Good entertainment is what it is, and that's what stories should be about.
Chapter 2 ?
So when does Jerry find out about Karen and put the slut to the curb ?
Threatening to cheat is the same as doing it.
Every Time
I like it every time I read it. Thanks.
Classic HDK
this is one I like reading again and again :)
Great story
I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Every wife should have a brother like Bill. I don't suppose you have Karen's phone number do you?:)
"Threatening to cheat is the same as doing it"
Summarizes the low level of intellect these closet cucks are living with, thank god for mental institutions and outreach programs so cansellyou, betrayed, and the rest of the cuck brigade don't hurt themselves.
So damned funny.
I loved it when Mary and Karen poured gasoline on the silly bitch wife. Either Jerry should be getting a lot more sex from his wife or he should be flirting with Karen. I especially liked the twist at the end, when it turned out that big brother was lecturing his little sister and setting her right. Great story!
Wow!! Like dynamite or C4 small, short and powerful.
This was a direct hit to the heart of the situation. When you play outside your relationship/marriage for the first time there are many variables as this story outlines just a few. Some people can easily deal with it but most can't/won't. I guess the moral of the story is think before you leap. Nicely written!
stupidity, thy name is anonymous
Professor S. I. Hayakawa must be rotating in his grave like a water turbine at the ignorance of people who say things such as: "Threatening to cheat is the same as doing it" as they lack the capacity, heck, the competency for semantic definition.
So that map I drew on a napkin, with a crayon, is the same thing as the actual property it roughly describes?
If i write a fairy tale does that make me a fairy?
If I write a story about a ferryboat does that make me a ferryboat?
if I write a story about Republicans, does that make me a Republican?
if i write a story about honest and competent Republicans would that make me a satirist or a fabulist?
Come to think of it, that would qualify as a fairy tale!
How did FinalStand put it “Standing in a Church does not make you a Good Christian, anymore than standing in a garage makes you an automobile.”
#2 HE AINT HEAVY
that's my brother. TK U MLJ LV NV
I'm going to fuck someone else, you can like it or get out..... why in stories like this or any story or hell even real life, why isn't throwing the bitch through a window three stories off the ground an acceptable response? I'd say its perfectly justified.
1/5
Unforgivable sins...
There are some actions you can commit against your partner that are unforgivable...this is an example of one of them. I'm sorry...I would never have forgiven it. It's pretty obvious that she didn't love her husband to begin with. When you love someone, the very thought of hurting them causes you pain. No wife could do this to to their husband and honestly feel any love for someone other than themselves, much less their husband. Hope he would divorce her slutty ass and marry Karen.
Excellent
Wifey could have become a cheating skank. However the threat of her husband enjoying some strange brought back her sanity. It's a shame no one ever talked to me. Oh well.
Wow. With friends like these who needs enemies
While the story is entertaining, I have serious doubts about these "friends". If i were Jerry, I would be looking for a new wife and a new set of friends. When a friend is going through a crisis, abandoning him to teach him a lesson is not the way to help. Neither is saying that the moment your "friend" makes a mistake in her marriage that you are chomping at the bit to seduce her husband. In real life, people commit suicide during situations like this. Then what would these "friends" think about their help? I would have to find another way to open my friends eyes than belittling him and abandoning him if he were making a wrong decision. Self-righteous people are a personal irritant to me. That is probably why I had trouble fully enjoying this story. I gave it a three for the good writing though.
I think Bill was blowing a lot of smoke into Sue's ear
His intention was always to get Sue to realize how stupid her desire to cheat was before she actually did it.
To the Anon
That asked "why isn`t throwing her through a window 3 stories off the ground an acceptable solution?"
Simple answer;
3 stories is survivable.
Get higher!
Say Goodbye!
Once she says that she is going to cheat and take a lover and he has to accept it or get out, the marriage is over. What kind of love can that woman have for her husband to say something like that? Where is the respect and loyalty? Even when she changed her mind it would be too late to save this sorry excuse for a marriage. You can't have a marriage when only one person wants to be faithful. And chances are real good that she will cheat in the future only she won't tell anybody.
His friends actually did him a huge favor by not accepting this behavior of him becoming a cuckold. I try to be as accepting of others as possible but I would not want a willing cuckold as a friend.
Am I being closed-minded? Maybe, but it is how I feel and believe-it is my opinion.
Thank You for a real thought-provoking story.
I DONT KNOW ABOUT THE TITLE
we all know you are not supposed to, TK U MLJ LV NV
After reading some of the comments here I have a question.
Okay, show of hands. How many commenters have English as their primary language? Okay, how many can read English?
The story was totally tongue in cheek. I think she ruined the marriage with just the ultimatum, but the way her brother handled the situation was priceless. He knew his sister enough to know that just trying to talk to her would be met with the arrogance and shitty attitude that he did get. So go in from the side door, back off the frontal assault.
Well done.
what a hoot
great use of over the top exaggeration to make your point. direct frontal attack as humour.
Common Theme
So many "Loving Wives" who think somehow that they should be able to get some strange don't stop to think how they would react if their husbands demanded the same privilege.
Sue killed the marriage...
and should suffer the consequences. She only dropped her self-centered scheme out of fear losing something herself. She doesn't give a shit about Jerry and never has as far as I can tell.
Jerry needs to show her the door, yesterday and let her earn a living giving BJ's at the bus terminal. If he does, Jerry will not have lost anything and Sue will have made the career move that she so deserves.
I don't like any of the characters including Bill and Mary. But the writing is pretty good. The dialogue is interesting and moves the story along and real people could say the words.
So 1* for the characters and for Sue (who would also benefit from a good case of the clap) and 3* more because it is a well written tale.
Loved The Ending!
That it was her own brother ripping her a new asshole was an unexpected delight!
Once again!!
A unique take on the LW story & a surprise at the end.
On second thought.
You'd make a pretty good lawyer.
Can I hire you if I ever have marital problems? :o)
So few stories focus on what happens before or preventing it (on either side). Great idea, great story and great twist at the end.
There aren't many stories I read more than once on this site, but...
I think I must have read this one 4 or 5 times and I enjoy it every time. HDK has put so much of a troubled marriage in one page. He said it all with one simple phone call. Brilliantly done.
I CAN DO ALMOST ANYTHING BUT
I cant allow that. TK U MLJ LV NV
Excellent!
I know I've read it before because I again zeroed in on the first phone conversation when Sue told her BROTHER he wouldn't be the lover who would get strange from her. Now, that was strange. But, as a college acquaintance once told me, incest is better than no cest at all.
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