You Can't Do That

Loved it!

NOthing more to say

Dang this is good!

Now this is an enjoyable loving wives story. Thankyou

Up to your usual standards

HDK,

You are a twisted man I can tell, but I do like the way you think. This story was fun AND it had a bit of a moral. Good stuff...as usual.

Great

Make sure you insert your tongue in cheek before reading.

Boyd

What can I say?

You just keep getting better HD.

AS ALWAYS....

SUPERB...THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT

Really Good

Great presentation of the other side of coin. Thanks again for writing.

Keeps getting better

Definitely one of your best.
You seem to keep improving with 'age'!
Can't wait for your next one.

Author! Author!

HDK:You have truly become the master of the "short" short story. I applaud the dialog and relish the ending.

Long Horn Had Better Post Soon!

these one-liner stories are such a waste of time. these "stories" have as much impact in our psyche as a "smart, sophisticated" Jerry Seinfeld joke. No sooner as they enter one ear, the other ear's all winded...

Wagon Tongue

You really do get better with every story. I can't offer criticism, but I can certainly offer praise and my sincere thanks for another great effort!!!

Confusing bit

Sue tells Bill: "You can bet your ass that you won't be the man I choose, so just butt out!".

Why would she have to tell her brother that? Doesn't it go without saying that she wouldn't fuck her brother . . . unless of course, they are a kinky family.

Great

Loved it- And at the end where she thanks her brother, That was perfect.

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Once again you have re-invented the genre. I have read and enjoyed everything you have written.
Thank you.
CW

Oh Boy

Here is this great story,lots of humor. And then we have a correspondent who can only comment on the one little glith in the story. HDK, your a bad boy!! Hey, keep sending your stories,I can deal with your horrendous mistakes. don

Yes!!

Superb! Enough said! Pete.

The usual

4 king A.

A great concept

HDK,

One of the Loving Wives stories with that's different. Well written as I expected, and a rather neat ending. Thank You. Ronnie W.

great read

pretty unusual, but good nontheless.

The moment that I saw----

your name on the piece my day suddenly got brighter (of course the sun coming up helped,,,,). Thanks for giving us another treat!

Outstanding!!!!

My, oh my! That was funny as hell. You continue to amaze with your wit, and that little twist in your thinking. Well, well done!

Tim C.

A slut wife in the brain, a jealous woman at heart

like most woman with nothing on their minds, she wanted to have and cake and eat it to. Suddenly someone came along who enlightened her, whats good for the goose is good for the gander. She would be a woman with children, with no real means of support, who is labeled a cheating slut and adultress out looking for a new provided so she can go out and play. And in the mean time, a real woman, could take her place almost immediately and provide her bushand with what she was failing to provide him, and even marry him if he wanted. The majority of women described in most of these stories, this one at least had an IQ high enough to understand when it was tattooed on her forehead, think what they have is so special that they can do anything they want and the husband has to accept it because they are special. Actually in most cases the husbands can do much better, especially if they have a job, and the women are showing that in addition to a very low IQ they have no self esteem, morals, or ethics. In other words, they are real sluts, just plain trash.

Once again,

...you seem to have written all the comments yourself.

YES!!!!!!!!

as well as it could be written

A nicely done story.

As always, for me it's a better day when I start it with an HDK story. I really liked the turn around - getting all the arguements out BEFORE the act.

Shaggy dog stories

Are stories where the only point is revealed in the last line called that in the US? They're intended to be funny. I skipped to the end of this piece quite soon and decided not to bother with the rest.

I often rate HDK high but not this one.

Great concept!

She announces her intentions, he tells her brother, friends and spouses get involved, she sees what's comming and chickens out. Prevention is a great thing, any proactive approch is better than what would happen otherwise. HDK is truly talented.

Just fantastic fun in Loving Wives stereotype’s

gone in your face.
This is another good day as HDK makes me smile and then laugh out loud. Man you are a twisted man with a great sense of humor. Your outlook on life has got to be one of pure optimism and with a smile for the world to see.Now wait for the people who take all this and make it into a serious piece to debate whether she was stupid and he a wimp and why they shouldn’t go ahead and swing together. I just enjoyed the great tongue-in-cheek and will read it again this evening.Seriously, thank you for brightening my day and all the wonderful effort you take to give us these wonderful fantasies.PT

I hated that it was too short

Can anybody give me Jerry's phone number? I need to remodel my bathroom and build a deck...LMAO

Great little story! Reading HDK stories is one of my guilty pleasures and he always leaves me wanting more. Thanks, author.

What the fuck was that?

That story sucked. You should write stories for Womans World or something. I come to this site to read a good fuck story. I read yours in hopes it would turn into that. Well it didn't. So please don't post any more of these silly ass stories. Maybe you should try writing a cook book, they have about the same amount of sex in them as your story.

Great Analysis

That's a brilliant story about all those who are planning to spice up thier lives after "so called careful thoughts". You do not need different violins to elicit different tunes, you need to know and enjoy the music. Great work, just keep it UP!

ALRIIIIGHT!!! wow outstanding Yuppe

WOW was that fucking perfect... 100? no try like 150 or 200...

Please ...

... don't write cook books. ;-) Give us more of your fancifull stories. Thanks from a german fan.
Nucleus

Go ahead, write the cookbook.

Coming from you, I'd read it. thanx for the shining star in what has become a blackhole on Literotica. LYG

Very Good

This is how a man should act. I wish other authors on Literotica would take note.

CRAP - pure unadultrated CRAP

Excellent Story - Erotic and Funny but True

I liked the twist at the end (which gives Bill legitimacy in his treatment of Sue). I think, though, IRL Sue would have already been too far down the road and would already have her affair in progress. Excellent characterization of the effects of infidelity upon either sex, though.

Yes You Can

WE,the male readers can always count on HDN to stick up for the rights of the downtroden husband.This is very well written and does look at both sides,And unlike some other authors I could name,has an ending.

Ok HDK,

This was one of your better stories guy

So what if it wasn't dripping sex. If that is your sole reason for giving it a bad rating and your outlet for sex is reading about it, you might want to find a new outlet for it (^_^)

But I laughed my butt off during the opening, and I was kinda curious why she listened as long as she did. Until the end that was. Fantastic.

-Risq

Niceeeee! And cool Twist

Wow after seeing how many comments there were I was eager to read the story. All I can say is very well done. The twist at the end pretty much answered a question I had when reading the story.(How could the husband's friend be yelling at his wife.) Good job and I'll be checking into more of your stories.

GREAT!!!

I've read many of your stories and liked most, but thus far this one is at least one of your pinnacles (if not THE pinnacle'). I find I like many of the 'Loving Wife' stories, but have little use for the 'willing' cuckold stories or swinging stories. It was a pleasure to see this actually verbalized this way.....and the 'brother twist' was something I never saw coming (and I'm often able to see these twists in advance). BTW: are you considering getting past the Beatles?....may try the Stones...c'mon, think what you could do with "Satisfaction"!

You've outdone yourself!

This story is creative, imaginative yet realistic, funny yet very sobering, and, above all, well written. For years I've felt that Literotica has created a misconception just by calling this genre of story a "Loving Wives" tale. The women in most of these stories are anything but loving and definitely not representative of what a wife should be. In fact, Literotica is doing a disservice to good wives who truly love their husbands by creating this misconception. And, on the other hand, the men in most of the stories have no character, guts, balls or common sense. As often stated, they are nothing more than wimps waiting to be cuckolded and humiliated. "Loving Wives" should be called "Slut Wives," and they should create a whole new section for "Wimpy Ding-a-lings."

Complete Surprise

at the end HDK. The guy being the charming housewife's brother was like finding a used condom in a patty of beef in your Big Mac. What really got me was when she told the man on the phone was that he would be the last one she would cuckold her husband with.

Well done

You've outdone yourself

HDK, you dog you! You've done it again, I don't how, but you keep outdoing yourself. Great story, quick read, funny, yet serious, & the twist at the end. Altho, I sorta had a hunch that your main guy had some kind of relationship w/ Sue, to be talking to her that way at the outset, but the ending still got me. Thanks for a great read, & keep them coming.

I really enjoyed it.

Great story. Well written. Keep up the good work. I am, however, left to wonder whether I would be as forgiving as the husband...

Yes!!!!

Story just about covers it. All I wanted to say will sign of as anonymous like some other small dick wankers who put negative comments and have no balls

Another Good One

But that's what everyone expects from the master, isn't it? Kudos, HDK.

I can't believe

One guy complained about the brother - as if, especially on Lit, incest never happens! LOL
Bloody hell, it's the second most popular genre with almost 14,000 stories - a lot more than LW's 10,600
AND, I thought it made a lot more sense that it was her brother talking to her like that.
AND, another thing, with seven brothers, all younger than I, I can tell ya I've used similar words to that woman in my younger days when one of the dorks made 'unsavoury' comments about what I may do at a party or on a date! "If I do, it won't be YOU!!", passed my lips a few times in the 60s...

Excellent

What's a brother for? I think he could have talked all month with Sue and never even put doubt in her mind BUT Karen, now, THAT thought of Karen fucking her husband's brains out made her attenae shoot sky high and her brain do a really fast 180.

Another great story!

Capital Story Mate!!!!

IT had it all, suspense, drama, sex...it moved me. Seriously, good to see a story where the woman see their mistakes BEFORE they make it. Good to see a guy stand up and say enough of this shit! Hit the marker on all counts.