Washing Up? Ch. 02

Sweet story

I really hope these two make a go of it. As someone who's romantically but not yet sexually involved with my sister your story seems very real, and highly erotic. Please keep it up!

Nice :)

I love this story...I like that you've taken time to split it into seperate chapters, rather than shoving it out as one rushed, sex-fest like a lot of people do. I think its real and intimate and cant wait to read more!
Looking forward to chapter 3! Well done :) x

Loved it

I agree that it is good that you split it up into smaller stories rather than one long, drawn out submission. It makes it more intimate and more intrigueing.

I love the intimac7y you are able to convey between them.....and the introspective quality was just wonderful. Its nice to get into their heads and see what they are thinking.

Getting Better

Good character development - you could make the stories a little longer - about 2 screen pages is good.

Well written . . .

Your character development makes me care what happes to these two. I just hope I don't have to wait too long to find out.

More!

Next chapter, pretty pretty please! Love the intimacy...

Love the pace of your story

The pace makes it feel real. Real life is full of mistakes, accidents, lost opportunities and that's what these two are going through. Love it - can't wait for more.

Brilliant!!

Very god story. Please write the next chapter. It is really intimate and loving.

love it

I love it my sister and I are in love and we both needed to have a good old fuck when we read this

Excellent

I was truly moved. Well done.

Definitely one of the better stories I have read

awesome, can wait to read more

Looking forward

Yes I'm really looking forward to the next phase of this story. Good luck.