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Not your usual..
While I see what you are trying to do with this story, it's not your usual style. The ending leaves me hanging, I'm hoping there's more? An enjoyable read, but not one of your best.
It was over the top
Kind of like a crazy soap opera, what with the obsessive ex-boyfriend whose father is a scientist with access to a sort of date rape drug; a psychotic best friend willing to commit murder at the drop of a hat; an girl who doesn't have any idea that her ex (Alan) is seriously dangerous; people being drugged and hauled all around town (twice in a night! no less). Because of all the nefarious evil doing, there wasn't hardly any time for actual romance.
Interesting, But
The plot was interesting, very dramatic. However, the ending was kind of a cop-out... I as the reader would love you to narrate the steamy scene between Tyler and Samantha.
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