All Comments on 'Midnight: Tea and Temptation'

by Alex De Kok

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Nice

Well written and hot! How about a follow-up story on these two lovers?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
keep going!!

keep going!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Honest and Good

Straightforward, honest and simple. Nice for a change.....Thanks! Without annoying spelling and grammatical errors. I think this couple should be explored further, as I like them!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
nicely done.

very well written. refreshingly so. you would do well to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Very nice

Very well written. No spelling or grammatical errors. And very grown up. I enjoyed it. Keep writing.

_Lynn__Lynn_almost 17 years ago
Great addition...

to the chain. Reading about an older couple was refreshing. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Deserves another Chapter or more

Same as title more aboht these two.

TE999TE999almost 17 years ago
Splendidly erotic

Well crafted and descriptive. Realistic dialogue and characters. An excellent addition to the chain. Kudos.

Foxee BrowneFoxee Brownealmost 17 years ago
Well Done!

Awesome job Alex, I knew you could handle this category without any problems, and this story proves it. Hope to hear more from Jack and Helen again someday.

slyc_willieslyc_williealmost 17 years ago
Excellent Chapter

Touching and sexy. Well done, Alex.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101about 16 years ago
This was

a really sweet and sexy story, although I can't help but think they would have needed more lubrication.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Again, Very Well Done

This is the second tale of yours that I have read. Both proved to be an excellent read with: believable premise and characters, loving exchange between consenting adults and leaving the readers panting for MORE! Very, very well done.

ChucksSiteChucksSiteabout 12 years ago
Hmmm. Guess one never knows what one will find when one can't sleep, but ....

I don't think I've ever been close to a similar situation. No house guest ever seemed to want me to join her or me, as a guest, never heard such a request. So, I especially enjoyed this little episode since it points to a situation that might still come to pass. Thanks to Alex for bringing it to us.

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July 13, 2023 - As some of you have no doubt realised, I'm writing again, albeit very slowly. My late wife was a writer as well, although not on Literotica, and I think she would have wanted me to continue. May 24, 2021 - I haven't posted anything for some time now, and it ma...