Telegraphed ending, "goin' with him, someday soon"
Good prose, but the ending was telegraphed waaaaay too soon, and I'm not a Garth Brooks fan.
I got it entirely from the old Joannie Mitchell song, "He loves his damned old rodeo, more than he loves me, someday soon, goin' with him, someday soon!"
Telegraphed ending, "goin' with him, someday soon"
Good prose, but the ending was telegraphed waaaaay too soon, and I'm not a Garth Brooks fan.
I got it entirely from the old Joannie Mitchell song, "He loves his damned old rodeo, more than he loves me, someday soon, goin' with him, someday soon!"
Great look at a frequent reality
There are lot of rodeo widows out there - this story caught the tension of the situation.
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