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by coaster206/11/07

Very good start.

Well written and holds the reader's interest. Grammar, vocabulary and punctuation are a non-issue. Everyone has to start somewhere and as a beginner myself, I know how hard it can be. Finish what you started and try again. You should get some feedback with a bit of luck.
Cheers,
Coaster

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by michchick9806/11/07

Good start.

Please continue.

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