All Comments on 'Doctor of Desire Ch. 01'

You're way with words is fantastic! Really enjoyed reading this. :)

They met in med school, five years later he was a med specialist and she was an assistant on a marketing job? . I didn't read much of it. Seemed disorganised. If the author doesn't care why should I?

Thanks Anonymous. I am grateful that some folks actually read the story and don't just skim to the juicy bits. I'd tidy up that bit of discrepancy if editing Literotica posts was a bit easier. And let's just imagine Lani experienced medical burnout during her first year of residency.

Finally, someone who writes about what goes on in the female character's head! well done.

Well done…..Now I need to read more chapters in this series!