All Comments on 'Panama Ch. 01: The First Stop'

by mikey2much

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great sea story

Your story touched on one of my favorite memories. I was a deck ape on a destroyer and got to through the Panama Canal

the same way, albeit twenty-five years later than the story was set. Excellent rendering of what it was like to

first sign on and hit the first foreign beach. Splendid work! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
my youth

i sailed as a boy of 17 from uk to central america as an officer cadet , this could have been my story in vera cruz all them years ago , she was beatrice not francesca but there the difference end. thankyou

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
sweet!

loving the humanity of your characters. Really well written.

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