The central character went through women --- and all these women he eats to multiple orgasms,,, appareantly neither he nor his sexual partners mind that they each have countless bodily fluid exchange with countless other sexual partners --- like he went through his drinks!
Each page alone he describes at least 4 women, with the character Tammy being the only one he mentions more than a few times. All the other ones are one-or-two time ancounters only.
It is obviously nothing more than a stroke story and there's nothing wrong with that; but with this kind of pace, with so many women being no more than masturbatory objects --- who, fair enough, also use him for the same purposes, so there's no good or bad guys here --- soon the eroticism loses its edge.
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The central character went through women --- and all these women he eats to multiple orgasms,,, appareantly neither he nor his sexual partners mind that they each have countless bodily fluid exchange with countless other sexual partners --- like he went through his drinks!
Each page alone he describes at least 4 women, with the character Tammy being the only one he mentions more than a few times. All the other ones are one-or-two time ancounters only.
It is obviously nothing more than a stroke story and there's nothing wrong with that; but with this kind of pace, with so many women being no more than masturbatory objects --- who, fair enough, also use him for the same purposes, so there's no good or bad guys here --- soon the eroticism loses its edge.
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