All Comments on 'All Brand New'

Very hot story. Need I say more!

The characters and situation were a little unusual and intriguing. I like your descriptions of sex.

There were a few typos that were a little distracting - might be nice to run a spelling/grammar check before submitting. But please, write some more!

I wish it was some moaning in it and shouts but it was good anyway

and I hope you add to as would like to find out what happens in the judges chambers and if she finds out about her folks from Harry Also would be interesting to see if she goes to the judges cabin with all his friends there and what antics they get up to. A nice read, good sex without being in your face and full of fun. Just need to check on your spellings.

Luved your story, and I hope you continue it soon.