Loved this piece, filled with love and a sense of completion. Very well described.
Greaat writing maan
I liked this story a lot, with its elements of both romantic and lustful love. And now I want a yacht too! Keep writing! Martha
That left me breathless... Please continue on with this story!
[...] Liam could no more resist her silent invitation than he could resist breathing...: The power of a woman's eyes!
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Passionate writing
Loved this piece, filled with love and a sense of completion. Very well described.
GREAT
Greaat writing maan
Lusty & Romantic
I liked this story a lot, with its elements of both romantic and lustful love. And now I want a yacht too!
Keep writing!
Martha
Lusty & Romantic
I liked this story a lot, with its elements of both romantic and lustful love. And now I want a yacht too!
Keep writing!
Martha
Wow!
That left me breathless... Please continue on with this story!
Another story tugging at my heartstrings
[...] Liam could no more resist her silent invitation than he could resist breathing...: The power of a woman's eyes!
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