All Comments on 'Wedding Night'

by DawnJ

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gazzclubgazzclubalmost 17 years ago
Passionate writing

Loved this piece, filled with love and a sense of completion. Very well described.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
GREAT

Greaat writing maan

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Lusty & Romantic

I liked this story a lot, with its elements of both romantic and lustful love. And now I want a yacht too!

Keep writing!

Martha

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Lusty & Romantic

I liked this story a lot, with its elements of both romantic and lustful love. And now I want a yacht too!

Keep writing!

Martha

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Wow!

That left me breathless... Please continue on with this story!

demure101demure101almost 12 years ago
Another story tugging at my heartstrings

[...] Liam could no more resist her silent invitation than he could resist breathing...: The power of a woman's eyes!

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