If there's one thing I love more than big kinky Goth girls, it's tight-lacing a big kinky Goth girl into a luxurious corset, so this just drove me wild. Hot, sensual spanking too? More, more, more, please!
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Anonymous10/14/11
misuse of a word
I liked the way your writing swept the reader up in the high emotions and erotica. One thing which irritated me was a word which is misused throughout erotica I have read, not just yours - please note that when someone trembles physically, it is called "shuddering" not "shuttering". Shutters are for cameras and windows! Otherwise, please keep writing - I enjoyed this scene.
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Tight-laced thrills!
If there's one thing I love more than big kinky Goth girls, it's tight-lacing a big kinky Goth girl into a luxurious corset, so this just drove me wild. Hot, sensual spanking too? More, more, more, please!
misuse of a word
I liked the way your writing swept the reader up in the high emotions and erotica. One thing which irritated me was a word which is misused throughout erotica I have read, not just yours - please note that when someone trembles physically, it is called "shuddering" not "shuttering". Shutters are for cameras and windows! Otherwise, please keep writing - I enjoyed this scene.
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