All Comments on 'Illicit Family Fuck'

And by no means erotic

gormless ? Define, please.

As a true tale, it started well, but what about the aftermath?

How'd they start, continue, etc. 1998-2007, something must have happened or changed.

the story, short as it is, was well done and well written. The details of the "act" itself were good too. But you could have taken it further!! The son could get involved, both taking her, the son alone with her, all sorts of thing. Come on, write more of it, and make them long.

You are in serious need of help. Go and see your doctor who will hopefully be able to refer you to a trained professional. You are sick.

missing some essential description of daddy and daughter's physical attributes. Too short, but who knows

Hell, I really liked that one, it's a bit short but that's kind of what makes it so steamy. I'd luv to see it continued, maybe with a little more description of the protagonists' outer appearances...

Great for a short story , but you should have used Mum to spice it up.