All Comments on 'Virtual Reality: Pokemon D/P Ch. 1'

excellent story! can't wait for the next chapter. thoroughly enjoyed the concept of the 'adult rules'.

Good God, that was extremely entertaining as well as arousing. Carry on.

Great work you guys. Normally I'm not into this stuff, but I've read some of yours in this series. I take my hat off to the lot of you for braving the chain story scene and getting the job done so well. So many of your scores are good, so I hope my votes for all of you have taken you one step closer to the little red H.

Interesting and original adult perspective of what is usually intended to be a kid's game.

A 3'5'' 10 year old? Damn that's short.

GREAT!!! I want more :)

Just great. very nice guys, found it much more intresting than i had hoped for. this was a great story look forward to more.

I love the amout of detail in your stories, I'm impressed that you actually have the patience to write with such attention to the little things.

This is good you should do more of it

you need to do more

My favorite Pokemon story now! Please do more.

more please

You've got me hooked onto this. That suspense where Piplup suddenly uses Hydro Pump - I was surprised! Thought it was Level Five or something. By the way, Piplup doesn't really have a type advantage against Garchomp. While Water is super-effective against Ground, Dragon actually resists Water. It probably doesn't make much of a difference to most readers, but proper fans of the Pokemon games might throw a hue and cry. :)

Nice story though. Looking forward to reading the rest of it.