All Comments on 'Virtual Reality: Pokemon D/P Ch. 2'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wow!

Wow! I wish I could take part in adult battles! More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
MMMMMOOOOORRRRREEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THERE MUST BE CONTINUATIONS OF THIS TALE. This has humor, plenty of teasing and is freakin' hot. Continue on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More

More, More, MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
wow

I am an avid fan of pokemon games and your stories have taken them to a new height, please keep them coming

Jedi_KhanJedi_Khanover 16 years ago
So, umm...

Where's the rest? You just going to give up the story, are you? Going to be like other authors who right great stories and then just up and stop writing them? Well, are ya? I sure as hell hope you don't.

While I gave up following Pokeman years ago, I do enjoy this story. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Immersive

Is the first word that comes to mind. Your talent is considerable. I strongly recommend you consider continuing the series. I anxious to see where it will go.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
continue please

such a good series keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice

This series is awesome. Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Yea continue the series. I would like to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Is this favorite sci fi show you mention babylon 5?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
compliment

i like it very much :D

could you please consider adding another chapter? :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
DAMN!!

DUDE WRITE MORE!!! You have got to write more this is perfect. No one could do it better. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
SHIT

amazing truely. Continue the story. PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Continue: Fan

Please Please continue writing this is totally awesome. Even in an adult themed story you have still managed to capture many of the characters attributes and personality. I would really like to see a chapter 9-? It would be awesome if you added some of the main characters from the main story to have an 'encounter' with Lynx or if you made it that he could travel to other regions by train or boat. Anyhow this is an amazing and well written series. Worth getting published if possible.

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