All Comments on 'Road Trip to Boston'

Truly well done. The throw-away line about having missed the first round was brilliant. Not only sexy, but belivable. Please continue the story.

Thank you - from one little wet-pussied girl in Boston. xxx

You are welcome

Very well done story! Very believable!

I'd like to read a 2nd chapter of it, if possible, or even a prequel telling us about her and her brothers 1st time playing with each other!

I was right there in the room! Great detail without losing the movement of the plot. Ignore the moron who gave you that low mark (probably had to have his mommy read him the big words :). I have been reading stories on Lit for about 6 years and you have that found that elusive balance between detail and driving the plot forward; too many authors get caught up in the minutia and don't spend enough time moving the plot along.

MORE PLEASE!

... in such a clever way you feel yourself there, comfortably partaking in the moment- great writing and fucking great orgasms!

The perfect group sex scene - romantic, sensual, perfect.

Excellent incest and more. I got hard while reading the first paragraph and stayed hard and jacked it all through the story. The threesome was so hot. I also enjoyed the casual way he asked his sister to jack him off before they started on the trip. Wouldn't it be great if sisters would all stroke their brothers so casually? You gave me a lot of pleasure. Thanks.

I'm glad that you're still writing and submitting! I've always enjoyed your work.

You almost got me to cum in my pants with this one... very hot!!!

The thing that separates an average story from a hot story is tension. Nicely done.

You are one of the best!

I loved it. Very well done

You really got me hot, I mean, cunt-flooding hot, in just a page. You're a real writer, too: I mean, you know how to WRITE. No awkward constructions, no misspelled words, no 'wrong' words ('except' for 'accept,' for example). I'm glad you could do so much in such a short space (Oh, wait, I said that—I'm still wet and my mind's not entirely on my writing, here.)

And thank you for using 'come' (the right word) instead of that ubiquitous and illiterate 'cum.'

Janie in Bellevue WA

Thanks for sharing.

Please continue this series - they have waaay too many adventures ahead to stop now.

M