All Comments on 'A Married Wife's Submission'

This is some silly stuff written by a young man without a lot of experience. Not belivable, not erotic. Tone down the fantsey to something that could happen.

I am your real master. I don't have a double chin and a fat belly like you do ...or maybe it's a skinny pimply faced snot nosed kid that got a handle...whatever stop writing ...do not write another fiasco...no more...hit the road...don't let the door hit you in the ass on the way out...

Alright, maybe you don't suck but your story does. First of all, there is no evidence that she is married or otherwise spoken for. Second, this was not erotic, there was no control, no submission of anyone except the readers who forced themselves to read this drivel. You show promise, but make it real...show us the humanity that keeps them from being cardboard cutouts. All it looked ot me, was a couple of teenagers getting their rocks off.

Stay away from this site until you are at least 16 years old.

Umberto

Wrong category.