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by wildsweetone06/11/07

poetry forum

i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone

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by Bill Dada06/11/07

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Very nice, really liked the line
'fluidity spills its worship.'
It is a little hard to read aloud (least for me) but I really like the image it creates.

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by tazz31705/23/12

A NEW TYPE OF JOY JELL

its better than honey and alum, TK U MLJ LV NV

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