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A Night with Daddy

byKellyJames©
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by Anonymous

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by AJZulu06/18/07

Wanting More...

I loved the story it left me only wanting more. I hope daddy and princess continue their exploits.

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by Anonymous06/18/07

Oh My Lord !

Whoever you are you should be getting 20 lashes for leaving us in this state . I have never been so turned on by a story . You drove me absolutely crazy . You had better continue or you will be sent up for torturing people .

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by Bedspread0206/18/07

Princess needs help!

Princess needs help, I think that her sister is the one to give her that help. Then you can have mom give the two little darlings the instruction and discipline that they both need for being so naughty!

Great story, keep writing

mikey

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by Anonymous06/18/07

Very hot!

Very hot and the perfect amount of non-sexual detail to set up the sex. I'm looking forward to more of your stories about encounters with Dad or other older men

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by Anonymous06/18/07

Great Story

This was a great first part to the story! I hope you continue very soon!

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by tinman69s06/18/07

Great start of a good long story!

First of all, let me tell you that I love incest stories. I am a pushover for a hot little lady and she can get me to do most anything. Just like this little gal did her dad!!
Keep the story going please!!

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by Anonymous06/19/07

fun

that was fun thank you :)

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by FriskyVirgin06/19/07

Fantastic!

It was a great story, hope to see a chapter 2 soon.

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by Anonymous06/26/07

thank you

I'm happy I found this story back. Please continue with another chapter.

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by Anonymous04/03/09

Give a little more detail...

His cumming was a little bit abrupt. While he announced it, how do he feel it coming on? Did his toes curl? Did the muscles in his legs tense? Did he feel it in his lower back slowly building up? Did his cock harden gradually in her mouth (and did she notice) on his way to spurting? how many times did he spurt into her mouth? Did she look into his eyes as he came or when did she do this?

Great premise and sufficient description of what she looked like, but as with many writers here, don't rush through building up the orgasm and how/what each person felt.

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by AJZulu11/26/10

Ummmm...

Very naughty...

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by brianna03029207/03/11

I love that story!!

Please write more like that one!!

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by Anonymous02/12/12

Cock Sucker

The epitomy of a perfect story. The world would be peaceful if women would suck mens cocks so willingly.

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by Anonymous11/07/12

Hot

Wonderful story. Write more.

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