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by roseNthorns06/20/07

nice

Very nice!

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by Anonymous06/21/07

Beautiful!

I enjoyed ready this well thought out and written story. I hope it goes on to another chapter but if it doesn't I have to say it was a wonderful story.

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by ladyshy06/21/11

please

please write a second part to this. i'd really like to know how she finds him

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