Good start. Looking forward to where the series goes from here.
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Anonymous06/21/07
Interesting Story
Good to see your stories once again. As usual, the spelling, punctuation and sentence structure are way above average for this site. And it seems like a pretty good story so far.
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Anonymous09/19/07
Yess!
You know, you're really, really good? I've kinda been on this site for a few years, and you're addictive. Just keep writin'.
And I know you probably get sick of this, but please please pretty please, continue Daddy's Little Angel.
I like how this is beginning, but I hope that she doesn't become a Sub right away without putting up a fight. Dru seems like a spunky girl and I would love to see how far she can resist these urges. That being said, I love how well you captured the anticipation & intrigue of online chatting/dating!
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Anonymous12/25/07
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Please continue this story. You've kinda got me on the edge of my seat here. lol
please tell me there will be more to this story!!! This is just so damn hot!!! Your one of my top Favorite authors on this site!! keep up the great work!
Glad to see you writting again
Good start. Looking forward to where the series goes from here.
Interesting Story
Good to see your stories once again. As usual, the spelling, punctuation and sentence structure are way above average for this site. And it seems like a pretty good story so far.
Yess!
You know, you're really, really good? I've kinda been on this site for a few years, and you're addictive. Just keep writin'.
And I know you probably get sick of this, but please please pretty please, continue Daddy's Little Angel.
Great potential!!
I like how this is beginning, but I hope that she doesn't become a Sub right away without putting up a fight. Dru seems like a spunky girl and I would love to see how far she can resist these urges. That being said, I love how well you captured the anticipation & intrigue of online chatting/dating!
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Please continue this story. You've kinda got me on the edge of my seat here. lol
more more MORE!!!
please tell me there will be more to this story!!! This is just so damn hot!!! Your one of my top Favorite authors on this site!! keep up the great work!
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