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Salma's Story Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/23/07

Several Times

I read this story several times before making a comment;needs much more attention to detail because at the moment it is just another incest tale.

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by Maximo106/25/07

Editor ?

If you would like assistance or an editor, please send me a note. I am in the USA ,not Indian ,but have traveled and lectured in the north. I also write history and as a hobby some erotica.
MaxMCapacity@aol.com

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by Anonymous07/26/07

Excellent

Excellent story. You made my cock hard. I love to read about a son fucking his mother. It's especially hot when he shoves his cock all the way in and gives his mother his fuck-juice. Excellent story.

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by Anonymous10/17/07

Goood

a nice story keep on wrting...wats the plan for next episode

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by digdaddyrich02/09/09

Quick and to the point yet very erotic

I enjoyed reading your story written in English, and have seen your story list with the other post written in your native language. Your native language (Tamil) looks so complicated, and I'm impressed with your usage of English.You have posted a good story which is very erotic, and I hope you will post more stories in English,because I know that I would never be able to learn Tamil. Thank you for the good post....Rich

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by Anonymous10/17/09

It sounds natural.

Such situations do arise from time to time, the words used are really getting you involved. Excellent please keep it up.

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by Anonymous11/08/10

Translation request

Could you translate your Tamil stories in English?
Thanks

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by Anonymous09/09/12

what crap!

man, the story SUCKS!! build it up a bit, get some tension, flesh out the characters and take it further...

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by Anonymous04/30/14

no, this is a fine story of hot motherfucking

I love how the mother, Salma's, eyes keep glancing at what her boy Shabbir's got jumping around in his pants. "It wasn't easy controlling her eyes, which kept looking at him and his tremendous erection all the time." Everybody understands how normal it is that an 18 year old boy like Shabbir is drawn to the wonderful hairy hole his mother has hidden between her legs. It's the same hairy hole he came out of, his own damn birth canal. But people forget how plenty of mother's are equally excited by what their darling baby boy's got swinging between his own legs--a big meaty mommy-pleaser that can do his mother a world of good. Mothers like Salma are often cuntally deprived. Either hubby's not around or he's falling down on the job. But they can be sure that a boy like Shabbir will never let them down. He's ready, willing, and very very able to take real good care of his dear mother's warm wet twat, he sure as fuck has the big hard cock to do it. The boy's at the height of his sexual prowess, he's constantly hard around his mother, and his hot young balls never quit--they just keep on producing that warm creamy semen that's so good for his mother's system. In this excellent story by a gifted lady author, Shabbir gives his beloved mom the fuck of her life, of his too, and he unloads his young balls and shoots his semen up where it belongs--right up inside his own mother. For the first but not the last time.

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