All Comments on 'A Mistress on the Plantation'

This took place in the early 1900's? You used terms that were not commonally used (or at all) in early 20th century...closeted, pschopath, dom etc. I am sure all this existed but the terminology was not used at least in my mind especially not for lay people. For a story to have plausibilty, it has to have realism in an historical context. Also, if the black woman was stronger, how did the white woman subdue her? Again, not realistic.

..is as the previous poster pointed out, anachronistic (not only in the language - can anyone imagine a white landowner in 1900 Georgia inviting a black worker into their house for tea?. It's also flat, characterless and totally unerotic. It's a great pity that Samuelx is one of the most prolific writers on this site as he is one of the least talented

This submission was very weak. this was pure crap.

I have to agree with them below it was crap

I wish it was me you were doing that to but I am a black male.

Being a psychopath and having no conscience IT'S A DISEASE and DEFINITELY CAN'T BE "a lot of fun" for anyone if that person isn't totally insane!And "doing anything at all without feeling guilty" IT DOESN'T MEAN AT ALL that you are "a free spirit",but that you are A FOOL AND A BASTARD!