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by coffinbait07/01/07

please continue!

Please continue this I loved it

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by Honour07/01/07

Shaping up

Well done lass like the Fern tale this has good potential. You have talent but perhaps it might be wise to consider approaching one of the voluntary editors after all good writing can always be made better. The very few mistakes there are could be quickly spotted by another eye sometimes we miss them in our own writting . Keep up the good work.

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