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Congratulations
Great effort, very good story, thanks for giving us the Wolf Creek series. Ada's end was sad but peaceful, unlike her life, which was certainly not quiet or sad.
great
Thanks for the novel!
I was so sad, when Ada heard of Sun Li's fate. And she should have kicked Kincaid in the ass. He so would have deserved it. *gg*
But William Hagen was still there for her... *melts*. I wonder if men like him exist in reality. *lol*
Love it, and I love the additions. :)
Thanks sr71plt!
Amazing story.
This is the story of people that draw you in to their lives, even in their struggles. Reminiscent of Gone with the Wind but nicer and more interesting.
Satisfying but not
Very good ending but I am frustrated that she wasted so many years! She could have had all that time with William! Over all fantastic - I could have gone without having Sung Li (is that his name) that was melodramatic. And what about her grandson?! You left that part unfinished! I hope Hugh steps in and protects him from that creep and his obsession with her family.
Great read and wonderful story!
Your story is what a novel is made of! Great job at telling the story and painting the picture for the minds eye to see. I will say I felt the demise of Hugh unclear, I can guess but I would have liked some validation.
Your characters were full, and realistic. Authentic. You might want to consider publishing this work. I know it is difficult to get a book out of it but have you considered an e-book? I believe you could make a lot of money off this story.
I haven't read your other work but will be doing so.
Thank you for fulfilling my desire. -Tamela
Published
Thanks for the nice comment and suggestion that this be published. An expanded version was published under the title of "Raven Possession" by habu in 2008. The paperback version seems to be out of print (and only available at humongous cost) but it's still available in e-book form at the usual on-line distributors.
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