All Comments on 'The Russian Enterprise Ch. 04'

Tony sure doesn't waste a moment, does he! Another piece of smooth writing in this series. Great stuff.

Hope the story builds slowy before WW's girl gets to Tampa.

You managed to get all the elements of the next part of the plot in place while still finding time for an indulgent, over the top sex romp. What can I say, Tony knows how to budget his time ;). I have to admit, I feel like Tony is the most peripheral lead in the story and I think that makes it tough to keep him interesting. Nevertheless, you do a good job of it and thank you for that.

Well, this was a good effort to build a little on your part of the story. Next time, feel free to write a longer piece though and bring the reader further along and into you story.