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Too cruel
It had some good parts, but the lip piercing was at the edge. The branding went over the edge. This is just sadistic and cruel, not sexual.
In Defence of the Author...
In Defense of the author, I have always stated the piece of work was commissioned. There fore the contents was requested to be Non consent, with high levels of abuse and to include the branding, the tattoo's and the body piercing. It's ok to slate the author for carryig out the requested work whilst the originator get off scott free. As individuals you have the choice to read or not to read a piece of work, but to the people who left disparaging remarks about the terrible acts contained, anonymously I may add. it clearly states in description stronger action, so why choose to continue reading? If it offends that much and you feel so strongly why not declare it instead of hiding behind anonymity....
You wrote it--You get the credit---No one held a
-gun to your head
Agreed
I agree no one held a gun to my head, just like no one holds a gun to any readers head saying you will rad this...
Therefore As I wrote the story for a specific person who was impressed enough to commission further chapters, then as they say beauty is iin the eye of the beholder and the beholder in this case is the person commissioning the works.
The fact they gave permission to share with the other reader's on this site is academic...
Not bad
I read alot of these storys, some are better then others. This one however I enjoyed. The lip percing I must say was a bit much, but the rest was good. I will read the more tomorrow.
If you want further comments email me at jester23@hotmail.com. I check that email every once a week or so, so if I find you emailed me ill give you my real one.
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