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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/23/07

It could have been much better.

2nd person writing is hard to get used to.

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by Anonymous10/08/09

Second Person

Although this would be good for cyber-sex...in a story format it was confusing and made it hard to really enjoy.

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by Anonymous08/20/11

more back story, tease me more.

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by Anonymous07/10/13

mmmmm

I am so fucking wet now

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