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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great

A lyrical tale!

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Torturous Love

That's so sad that each of them haven't let go so they are torturing each other with their incredible love. This was a great story and I would love to see a continuation to when they finally say goodbye and they each move on, like her eventually finding someone new and he blesses it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Morbid

I hate this story. It's so morbid. A woman dreaming of her dead husband having sex with her? That's sick. Psychotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

A tale with feeling, Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I am a man in my mid eighties who has seen wars and had many experiences, yet you managed to bring tears to my eyes.

For anyone to suggest that this is morbid, just goes to show that they are sadly lacking in imagination and any feelings of sympathy for their fellow mankind.

I am well aware that this is fictional but in the depths of grief I could well understand someone having such feelings Well written, thank you.

StubbyoneStubbyonealmost 3 years ago

This brought tears to my eyes. People do love this strongly. An amazing piece of superb writing. Thank you.❤️😂

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's not happy, but it's EXQUISITELY written. Five stars.

anubeloreanubeloreabout 1 year ago

So sad, so beautiful. Damn it. Onions and dust in my eyes.

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