Good job! I really enjoyed this! Keep up the wonderful work!
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Anonymous06/24/07
Good story, but
it isn't really an interracial story - there is just one mention of her being black at the beginning and nothing else. You need to talk more about the coloring of her (and his) body and other racial characteristics to emphasize the contrasts.
Great story, turned me on no end. Keep writing please. If you like a long romantic sexy story please read how me and my boyfriend Tom met on the beach when we were with other partners
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Great little story!
Good job! I really enjoyed this! Keep up the wonderful work!
Good story, but
it isn't really an interracial story - there is just one mention of her being black at the beginning and nothing else. You need to talk more about the coloring of her (and his) body and other racial characteristics to emphasize the contrasts.
SEX, what else is there?
Great story, turned me on no end. Keep writing please. If you like a long romantic sexy story please read how me and my boyfriend Tom met on the beach when we were with other partners
Love Sue xx
Mmmmm, yummy.
I simply loved your short story.
Unless the house has a million dollars in gold
Why the hell would anyone need a sitter for an empty house for 5 hours? Who watched it before she walked up and why?
Wow
MORE .. WANT MORE ..what happen next.?
Hot!
Nicely done. Good story.
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