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David Dreamscape Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by walkingeagle06/24/07

Keep it coming!

I'm enjoying this---but please hurry with more! It is great work!

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by skip.6910/04/07

Building up

Building up nicely, pagan. I do so want to read the rest of this story, and imagine myself in David's place.

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by Anonymous06/18/11

Satiable

This story hit me with the force of a tornado and rolled over me with the same intensity. Don't stop.

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