Well written, very hot. Just the right amount of dominance and submission without being whips and chains level. Great series. Can hardly wait for the next installment, but at the same time I hate to see it come, because that means we'll be that much closer to the end of the series.
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Anonymous06/25/07
WOW! This is so HOT!
This story is smokin! This is the ultimate fantasy! I busted two nutts while reading this chapter. I can't wait until chapter 6 with the pool party. Please make sure the girls are there so Ally can lick young girl pussy, while getting plugged by all that teenage cock! Yummy!
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Anonymous06/25/07
great all around story
Great story, well written scenes, dominance and control without pain but mutual enjoyment, no hangups, all around great story. thanks
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Anonymous06/25/07
Great series
This is a great series,you have to really concentrate when reading it to sort out who is doing what with whom,that is what i was getting at about Victoriana.A pity it has to end,would make a good erotic novel.
Thank you all for the e-mails and comments. Many of you asked about Chapter 6 and it is pending approval along with Chapter 7. They should be available shortly.
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Great story
Well written, very hot. Just the right amount of dominance and submission without being whips and chains level. Great series. Can hardly wait for the next installment, but at the same time I hate to see it come, because that means we'll be that much closer to the end of the series.
WOW! This is so HOT!
This story is smokin! This is the ultimate fantasy! I busted two nutts while reading this chapter. I can't wait until chapter 6 with the pool party. Please make sure the girls are there so Ally can lick young girl pussy, while getting plugged by all that teenage cock! Yummy!
great all around story
Great story, well written scenes, dominance and control without pain but mutual enjoyment, no hangups, all around great story. thanks
Great series
This is a great series,you have to really concentrate when reading it to sort out who is doing what with whom,that is what i was getting at about Victoriana.A pity it has to end,would make a good erotic novel.
Chapters 6 and 7 are in the queue!
Thank you all for the e-mails and comments. Many of you asked about Chapter 6 and it is pending approval along with Chapter 7. They should be available shortly.
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